Bade Acche Lagte Hain - Paanch Saal Baad -- Part 90
after a Long time i m back with the FF Bade Acche Lagte Hian paanch saal Baad.. Part 90
In short story so far...
I took up a plot " if ram priya were not seperated" pihu khush grew up together. ram priya had a good life together fighting loving each other time passed and there came a leap in my story. Pihu and khush are now in sventeens. Ram priya are facing troube with the grown up kids. pihu went through a bad patch when she was intoxicated, the kapoors, were coping up with the situtation , sudheer had a heart attack. and on the same time priya came to know that Pihu is getting attached to a guy "Vyom Singhal." ram was not aware of it , but b4 priya could inform him , he get the information from vyom's mom , with her help pihu changed her trade of +2 hiding it from ram priya. ram fumes over priya for keeping the it secret, he misunderstood her , as priya was not aware of the development. On the other hand , khush like a protective brother with two of his friends attacked vyom at a cafe. he ended up fighting with him. Vikram noticed him and took khush to his house, and informed ram priya at the same time. The kapoor couple came into a big trouble with the two kids at the same time, even their relationship stood infront of a big misunderstanding. Ram tells priya that she has failed as a Mother. Now the story moves further......
Part 90 ...
IT was a day when ram priya , was shattered … due to their children …
Pihu their love , made them ashamed , really ashamed of what they did , and ram
was angry on priya , hurt by her , she kept aside about pihu’s truth . she knew
half truth of pihu but she kept it aside only due to time , she didn’t hide it
intentionally. Ram blamed priya , without even caring about her , about her
clarification, they are both hurt , conserved in their ego. But they knew ,
their ego should not get priority when their kids are in danger vulnerable.
Priya was in her bedroom , she checked the watch and stepped out of it
, to look out for the kids , when she was half way to pihu’s room she saw ram
coming up , seeing priya , ram stopped..
Ram :: you don’t need to think about my kids I m still alive to think
about them. You just think about
yourself and the family.
yourself and the family.
Priya wanted to clarify it to ram but before she could do it , he left
, rushing into pihu’s room. Priya turned and left for khush’s room.
At Pihu’s Pinkdom.
Ram knocked at pihu’s room
Yes…… pihu’s voice came….
Ram :: May I come in beta.
Pihu :: she was surprised , she jumped , opening the door said : you don’t
need permission papa
Ram : really , he said coming in.
Pihu sat on the bed with her heads down , ram sat by her , holding her
hands he said : so whats ging on your life , why I have no updates when I
thought u r papa’s beti.
Pihu : papa I m sorry , for what I did to change my trade.
Ram : if u really wanted to do it , then u could have told me beta , and your mamma
knew it??
Pihu :: no papa she didn’t have n e idea .
Ram interrupted and asked :: and about vyom? She knew.
Pihu : this morning she came to know , and I didn’t wanted to hurt you
papa.
Ram : pihu , u take me as your friend?
Pihu : without n e doubt papa .
Ram : then can I ask something? Pihu nodded
Ram : you and vyom are good friends? Pihu looked down and didn’t
responded. Ram continued : “ ok pihu , I think I have put you in a very awkward
situation. He stood up .
Pihu : Papa…. She stopped him. Ram stopped and looked back.
Pihu holding back her papa’s hand
said: ::: papa , I and vyom are good friends, nothing else , but mom is
not liking it at all. We are just friends trust me papa.
Ram :: I trust you beta , as I trust your mamma.
Pihu : papa , I will not let you and mamma down.
Ram :: I know , and I m not against you and vyom . I support your
friendship , but this age , is for settling the career for you and also for
vyom , he is a Singhal and you are a Kapoor , khush is a kapoor , this empire
is on you and khush , after me , after chachu , who will take of this all , you
, khush , chikoo , who else? Tell me.
Pihu didn’t responded she looked down .
Ram (taking pihu’s hand on his said) : so should I get a response from you?
Pihu : yes papa I promise you ,
I will not let you and mamma down. But please don’t fight with mamma.
Ram : pihu its me and my wife’s matter , we can solve it , tum fikkar
maat karo.
Pihu :: sorry.
Ram :; don’t be beta ( ram took pihu in his embrace). Don’t blame yourself. You and vyom are good friends
that I m taking and supporting , and I add I will not go against you ad your
friendship. Ram stood up.
Pihu hugged ram tight . ram smiled and kissed on her forehead. Patting
on her shoulder ram left.
At Khush’s room.
He was hurt physically , he was trying to have first aid himself. He
looked at priya through the mirror ,stopped and looked down. Priya came inside
, taking his hsirt off she applied savlon and balm to heal him. Putting a t
shirt on he sat on the bed . priya taking a chair sat infront him.
Priya :: Look at me khush.
Khush managed to look at priya .
Priya : Khush I will not appreciate what you did today , but I also
know that its natural for a brother to react. Even your mamu reacted once for
me , when he was just of 15 but , fighting at public place, you should have
thought once about yourself , about who you are? Which family do you belong to?
Itna toh sikhaya naa meine tuje.
Khush maintained his silence.
Priya came stood up and continued ::: Khush , you know the truth that I
have not given birth to you. But you and pihu are no different to me . dard
tumhe hota hain toh mera dil bhi rota hain beta. If you do any wrong , I m
responsible for that because you are my son. If pihu is my daughter then you
are my son that’s the only difference. Iske alwa koi aur sachayi na kavi thi na
kavi hogi. And I don’t want n e return of n e of my child no I don’t want n e
return.
Khush this time broke into tears and hugging priya said ::: I m sorry maa
, I m really sorry but the way vyom is bumping into pihu’s life I cant take it
. I don’t like that guy , I really don’t
like him, I want him out of her life.
Priya turning to tensed khush said :: uske liye mein hoon naa .. tere
bade papa hain naa. You just don’t try to confront him . bahut umeedein hain
tujse beta , even from pihu . concentrate on your career , and pihu is also my
responsibility , I will take care of her well. What I want now is to share
everything what you saw , feel with me . samjhe.
Khush looked up and nodded.
Priya wipping his tears , and kissing him on his forehead said:: that’s
like my boy. Now take rest I will send food to your room.khush was about to
speak when priya was about to leave. Priya turned to him and asked him not to argue
more. He settled back. Priya went out , and when she walked to pihu’s room she
saw ihu chatting with vyom online, and she was happy.
Priya knocked at the door, her daughter looked back.
Priya :: would you like to have some food????
Pihu stood up :: mom please let me explain.
Priya :: I have got it .
Pihu turned off the laptop :: mom please.
Priya :: your father had a talk with you I guess , and I know what he
told you and what you are doing.
Pihu ::: mamma app meri baat kyun nahi sun rahi hain. papa listned to
me understood me and you.
Priya :: I will send your food to your room , and I think now you r mature enough to handle yourself. So please
before private chats close the door. Priya closed the door before pihu could
react and left.
Walking down to the dine , priya neglected everyone except her mother
in law , she had a brief chat with her , and asking bansi kaka to serve the
kids food in their room she left. Ram watched him and he knew that it’s the
time he has to face his wife , he has to confront her.
It was Late night…..
Ram came into his bed room. Priya was still awake engulfed in pihu
khush’s childhood albums..
Ram ::: soyi nahi..?? abhi tak
Priya :: time passes so fast.
Ram :: yes it does, and priya I m sorry for what I said .
Priya : really you are Mr.kapoor.
Ram :: what do you mean priya?
Priya :: I think you can smell what do I mean??
Ram looked surprised at his wife.
Priya :: I was at pihu’s room whe you were with her , but I really
wanted you to clarify the situation to her , but you made it more complex .
Ram : what do you mean??
Priya :: after talking to khush I went to her room and what I find ,
giggling and laughing with that singhal kid…that you clarified??
Ram : she is growing up priya.. she needs some space.
Priya :: I know but itna bhi nahi ki she becomes a matter of teenage
love at sweet sixteen
Ram :: from where to where you are taking it priya ??
Priya :: I m the mother Mr.Kapoor , I can sense what my kid is feeling
..
Interupting priya , ram screamed :: And I m a No man right madam.
Priya :: who said that … but you are the father…
Ram :: thank god you really know that priya , that I m the father , so
do you really think I will do wrong for my kid.
Priya ::: but its not the age to give full freedom to kids.
Ram : it’s the age to cage them right ??
Priya :: who said that??
Ram ::: I think in this room only me and you are present….
Priya :: you are getting me wrong , I m not asking her to cage up , I m
….
She couldn’t complete ram shouted :: enough priya , I have already got the result of trusting you no
more…
Priya :: no more what do you mean by no more???
Ram :: do need a hear piece madam.
Priya :: you need a reality check Ram , and no one has the right to
stop me from getting my daughter out of all odds.
Ram ::: and you are messing up it priya.
Priya :: no I m not you are.
Ram :: ENOUGH.. he shouted loud.
Priya :: I can too…
Ram :: better do those which will help our kids to grow , not your ego
.. and I m not interested in talking to
you with you …GET LOST ….
After hearing get lost from her husband she couldn’t resist her tears
to come apart from her eyes, she rubbed it , before it could tickle down her
cheeks , keeping the book aside she skidded into the duvet to the bed turned
aside hiding her face from her husband, allowing her tears to run down her
cheeks. Ram on the other hand could really feel what he actually did to priya ,
how much she is hurt , he wanted to talk with her but his ego stopped him. He
skidded into the same duvet turning to the other side , closed his eyes to
sleep. But in reality the night went
sleepless for the couple.
Precap::: Dark faith awaits for ram ……
Note ::: All parts will be updated soon in the blog .. Keep a look at this blog...
good job di! really enjoying the current track egowala love plz update next part soon..........
ReplyDeleteDi,ur track is superb.......Please updates the episodes soon. I m very eagerly waiting 4 it!!!
ReplyDeleteYou left me with no words old Ram is back who is blind in his daughters love Priya tried to handles the matter maturky but I guess Peehu is over smart then Ram she managed well to distract Ram anyway Ram has again understand Priya wrong don't k ow where will this turn out so moving for next to read...
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